I look up
Light slides under the door
And enters the room
My eyes close
I pull the comforter tighter
Around my naked body
The sheets are crumpled at my feet
Images from the past hours
Flash through my mind
I rub my feet together
The room is too cold
And something in my head tells
Me it shouldn't be like this
The pain
It was too much to bear
A tear slides down my cheek
Light suddenly floods into the room
I know he's back
I turn and face the wall
Pretending to be asleep
His hand touches my shoulder
It's ice cold
I try not to flinch
Givung up, he leaves the room
Footsteps
The front door slams
And he's gone...
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